问题补充：
When I first learned to write in English，I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.much改为many
答案：
(答案→)much改为many
解析：短文改错要注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。要从细节着手，在平时要多积累。
【小题1】much改为many 后面的名词difficulties使用的是复数形式，故使用many修饰，much不能修饰可数名词复数形式。
【小题2】in改为that 本句中的that引导的是一个表语从句，that在句中不充当任何成分。In是多余的。
【小题3】anything改为everything代词anything通常用于疑问句和否定句中。而本句是一个肯定句，使用everything。
【小题4】my改为a固定搭配keep a diary写日记。不需要使用My来修饰名词。
【小题5】去掉should本句中的put down与前面的keep是并列关系，不需要使用should。
【小题6】talk改为talking固定搭配enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事。Enjoy后面接动名词doing的形式。
【小题7】me改为myself表达自己的意思使用express oneself。使用反身代词作为express的宾语。
【小题8】show后面接it固定搭配show sth to sb=show sb sth向某人展示某物。It指代a little。
【小题9】reads改为read动词read是一个不规则动词，过去式和过去分词都使用read。
【小题10】word改为words本句中的words指他所说的话，与后面的were保持一致都使用复数形式。
