如果你看过了之前关于中式表达的文章，
你应该记得“你的思考和读者的感受”之间的关系。
还没看过那篇文章，我强烈建议你，
回头先看一看，文中提到的几个中式表达的问题。
今天接着上一章内容，履行当初的诺言，
我将为你指出五大类中式表达错误，
以及对应的改法。
你的心里越对写作感到恐惧，
我越有责任为你排掉这种干扰，
鼓起勇气，和我一起，一步一步走出写作的阴影。
第一种：措辞错误
措辞错误，简单来说，
就是用错单词，把不合适的词用在了句子中。
尽管中文上读起来通顺，
可英文上意思就差那么点意思了。
下面为你标注，红色单词为正确用法。
I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. Each form of having friends has its advantages. Each form of choosing friends has its advantages. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to apply. They will learn the bad habits. They will develop bad habits. In this continued process, people make progress.In this cycle, people make progress.Lastly, high education is equal to higher salary. Lastly, higher education means higher salary.A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. A wrong decision will bring even worse result.You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. I felt alone. I felt lonely. A house is a fortune. A house is a piece of property.So I lived there last night.So I stayed there last night. There was little change in the numbers of spending on education.There was little change in the amount of spending on education.Doctors have tried their best to survive my grandfather.Doctors have tried their best to rescue my grandfather.He is my most favorite person in my life. He is the closest person in my life. 第二种：词组翻译错误
词组也是个老大难问题，
灵活运用词组，一方面要深谙其中意思，
另一方面要多读国外作者的文章，体会他们的目的。
这样边用边学，我认为效果会更好。
不少同学提到词组，整个人都要“重组”了。
下面我就列一些比较常见的错误，能背下来也算进步。
life conditionsliving conditions (生活条件)living level living standard (生活水平)living quality quality of life (生活质量)earn good achievement make great achievements (取得卓越成就)to save lostto avoid loss (避免损失)around the country across the country (全国各地)see from the long visionin the long run (从长远看)experimental group/contrast group treatment group/control group (实验组，对照组)long distant educationlong distance education （远程教育）heart sick heart attack （心脏病）第三种：口语化错误
这一类错误，绝对和个人习惯有密切关系。
仔细一点，认真一点，绝对可以改掉。
3 reasonsthree reasonsa lot of people many people, a large number of people if A or B whether A or B like A and B such as A and B I think, sports have advantages and disadvantagesI think that sports have both advantages and disadvantagesI have to say sorry to you I have to apologize to you Thanks a lot Thank you very muchSorry again I apologize again He is sick now and is in the hospital （在医院）He is sick now and is in hospital （住医院）
第四种：修辞错误
我觉得修辞是比较难讲清楚的一个方面。
很多高分同学在这方面特别纠结，
总想找到一些解决方法，却苦于没人教。
今天给你总结2条最常用的修辞原则。
记不记得住，看你自己的动力了。
第一条：能用主动，就别用被动
比如：
Recently an announcement is made by the government that it plans to build a new university.
The government has recently made an announcement that it plans to build a new university.
再比如：
We were told by the doctor that his life is in danger.
The doctor told us that his life is in danger.
相比被动，主动语态更直接，更肯定，不婉转。
自然它的出现，会使得句子逻辑很通顺，意思也能一目了然。
第二条：能用动词，就别用名词
比如：
The government has recently made an announcement that it plans to build a new university.
The government has recently announced that it plans to build a new university.
名词和动词之间，不少单词都有相关的转换。
当你下次，第一反应想写名词的时候等一等。
转换下思维，看看能否用动词替代。
第五种：其他错误
etc. = and so on et al = and others （不要用省略符号）I will return the books in 2 weeks.I will return the books in two weeks.《Gone With the Wind》Gone With the Wind 中文书名号不可用can , can not 改为cannot 这些都属于细枝末节的错误，有则改之无则加勉。
总结
中式表达的错误，到此就告一段落了。
能总结和提炼的部分，
基本上我也算给大家一份比较完整的介绍。
中英文之间是存在差异，一方面是使用习惯，
另一方面是表达的思路区别。
总之，没有大家想象的那么那么困难，
雅思大小作文加一起，最多500多字。
去掉常用冠词，名词，介词，
能出错的概率并不大。
前一篇和今天的这一篇，你尽量记住并改正，
那么这个顽症会有明显改善。
祝早日通过雅思考试。
载着你的梦想，冲破雅思写作难题
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